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I just caught The Wolfman. It was alright, not the best horror movie I’ve seen, but as a remake of an old classic I once watched whenever I could as a child it wasn’t bad. Some good scenes of the werewolf stalking and tearing apart its victims, a painful looking transformation, nothing like An American Werewolf in London mind you, and some cool recreations of old England. The wolfman did look like a fuzzy bear at times and some of the CGI was weak but overall I had fun watching it. What more can you ask for then that?

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Page 2- Panel 1-6 don’t need to be big, they just need to convey the passage of time.
Panel 1
Close up of Charlie seated in the car watching the house burn.

Panel 2
The house is fully ablaze at this point. Lots of smoke is coming off it.

Panel 3
Same as before except Charlie looks like he is dozing off.

Panel 4
The fire has caused parts of the house to have burned away by this point.

Panel 5
Charlie has fallen asleep.

Panel 6
Parts of the house have collapsed as the structural integrity of the building weakens.

Panel 7
The story shifts into the past. It’s day time. The mansion looks old still but in better condition, like some one has taken care of the property. A 70's Buick Riviera has pulled up the driveway. A moving truck is pulling in behind them.

Dad from the driver’s side: So, what do you think Charlie? Didn’t I say it was a beauty?
Charlie: Whoa Dad. It’s gigantic.

Panel 8
Charlie’s Mom and Dad have gotten out of the car. The Dad has that proud papa smile on his face, while Mom’s joyfully taken aback at seeing the house for the first time.

Mom: Oh my God Roger, it’s gorgeous.
Dad: It used to belong to a Professor of ancient culture or something at Miskatonic University.
Dad: He disappeared without word and his estate had to sell the house.


 
February 27th, 2010

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